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Show a man what he expects to see
And he won't look beneath the surface.
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and sometimes it's only madness that makes us what we are
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This is irrelevant to my invesitgation of the panty-waist sissy snatcher
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PostPosted: Sun Jun 05, 2011 7:45 pm  Reply with quote
Professorman Johnson
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Joseph you have yet to share your fascination with words in the form of diatribe onto this board yet.

What ever happened to Jacky and his obsession with his girl's name? Did the woman with the meat kill that guy in the car? I go through your blog [the shame] and amongst the unprecedented level of horrible you are I find no conclusion to your vivid tales, holmes.

Arguing with the cops is like shaking your fist at God. There's nobody there; and if there is, he's not listening. And if he's listening, all you're doing is pissing him off.
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PostPosted: Sun Jun 05, 2011 11:02 pm  Reply with quote
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Oh yeah the screenplay junk on there. Thank you for saying it's VIVID like the porn company.

The woman with the meat screenplay never got finished though I toy with ideas of reviving it one day. It was supposed to be a post-apocalyptic downer and the guy was meant to kill the girl at the end, actually. But he doesn't want to, he just has to because she forces him to fight her and he wounds her bad and she ORDERS him to do it then. That said, the whole screenplay was largely a bunch of rage-filled, fucked up ideas I wanted to have happen and they were often only tenuously connected and making the whole thing work would require massive rewriting and really a pretty big overhaul of the concept.

What's funny is that it was supposed to be sort of a satirical action movie with the leads killing people callously. And also there would be some vague romance between the protagonist (who was to be black) and the lead guy (who was a whitey). And I wanted the woman to be played by the BYOOTIFUL Aisha Tyler who is now the voice of Lana Kane on the satirical spy cartoon show, Archer, where she's a (black) hitwoman and has an on-again-off-again relationship with a white guy and they kill lots of people without second thoughts. I'm not gonna say I was plagiarized, I'm just gonna imply it's VERY LIKELY AND HAPPENED.

The Jacky thing was a short film script based on my friend who works on real life movies' appreciation of the relationship in the show FLCL between an older girl and a young boy. So we ripped that off and put it in a more realistic setting. It's finished but it was more of an exercise than anything else and if I ever went back to it it would probably, based on my friend's notes, just get more fucked up and pornographic because right now it's really tame and who needs that.

But yeah basically things briefly get hot and heavy with an older girl, Jacky's tutor, Jamie (who has a boy's name, see what I did there?), and then it quickly falls apart and Jacky is sad at the end. Sounds good, right?

I haven't done real screenplay writing in a long time due to a past dislike for it but I am warming up to it more because it's a lot faster than stupid stories so I might write things movie-style again one day, one dayyyyy.
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